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My Theatre II Scene

May 24 2010, 1:23 am
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OlimarandLouie

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May 24 2010, 1:23 am

OlimarandLouie Post #1

So guys, as a last assignment for the year in my Theatre II class, we were supposed to write dramatic scenes and then our teacher would pick one one them, and we would perform it with the author acting as the director. This is the one that was picked. Edit: It is not mine
What you are about to read is copied exactly as it is on the papers I'm holding.

Quote from name:the script

After getting manny from school.
Adrian walks in to the living room
A- what's going on?
B- "Nothing we are just watching a movie"
Ben has arm around Adrian and quickly removes it and walks out the door
Adrian gets up
S- "wait, Wait'
A-"Let him go" so what going on
S-"He caome over to watch a movie"
A- Don't give me that crap, I have to go manny lets go
Adrian and manny walk out of the house.
M- So what's going on, were are we going.
A- we are going to grandmothers for a while
Adrian and manny walk up to the door
M1-"I'm coming, I'm coming, "better not be girl scouts". oh its you
A-"It's Spencer", "she"
M1-"come in"

they walk in
A- "manny go up stars and go to bed".
M1- "so who did she cheat on you with".
A-"Ben"
M1-"OH Him"

weeks went by after getting the situation figured out and what to do.
A- " today is the big day", just hope we can still be a family me and you"
M- I hope so but it's up to the judge"
they get in the car to go to the court house.

court scene
JM- so we are here in the case of a love traingel Mrs. stan can you tell me what happen and why your are here.
A- "ell for the past year this lady right here has been nothing but trouble she has cheated on me numbers of times and not to mention with my ex"
JM-"Mrs jones can you tell me your side
S-"your honer i did do what she said I did but i was showing her how it felt to be cheated on"
JM- "Will Manny come up to tell her story"
Manny waks up and the cop tells her to put her hand on the book.
C-" do you swear to tell the truth the whole truth"
M- I do.
manny walks up to the stand and sits down.
M-"I want to live with Adrien she more of a mother then Spencer is.She is allways there when i need her but spencer doesn't care about me"

Forty'Five minuts go by.

JM- manny you get to live with Mrs jones and Mrs willson you signed a prenuptial agreement so every
thing goes to Mrs jones.
Everyone walks out

The text in red are the corrections made by the author before she gave us the script.

Discuss this excellent piece of literature.

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May 24 2010, 1:28 am

Aristocrat Post #2

:wallbash:

Horrid. Absolutely horrid. I can write better drama by smashing my elbow against the keyboard for five minutes.

Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on May 24 2010, 3:34 am by DT_Battlekruser. Reason: for color

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May 24 2010, 1:30 am

Fire_Kame Post #3

wth is starcraft

OMG ARISTOCRAT CHANGE YOUR FONT COLOR

also...that really sucks.

May 24 2010, 1:31 am

Apos Post #4

I order you to forgive yourself!

Is it a true story?

It was sorta... Like when... Just as... When they... You know what I mean?

Edit: I had to reboot, my computer crashed...

May 24 2010, 1:32 am

Dem0n Post #5

ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ

Dear god... :hurr:

May 24 2010, 1:35 am

MadZombie Post #6

Gradeschool?

Let me one up you.

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May 24 2010, 1:36 am

CaptainWill Post #7

What a load of cobblers.

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May 24 2010, 1:40 am

OlimarandLouie Post #8

This is my high school Theatre II class. This was written by a sophomore.

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May 24 2010, 1:44 am

CaptainWill Post #9

Quote from

OlimarandLouie

This is my high school Theatre II class. This was written by a sophomore.

Then the teacher must be sharing a single brain cell with the rest of the faculty.

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May 24 2010, 1:46 am

OlimarandLouie Post #10

I'll give 50 minerals to the first person who can rationalize this story and turn it into something that is actually readable with correct grammar.

I can see this turning into a meme:

Quote from name:the script

can you tell me what happen and why your are here.

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May 24 2010, 1:52 am

poison_us Post #11

Back* from the grave

*Hilariousness ensues from me pointing out obvious grammartical errors*

May 24 2010, 1:54 am

dumbducky Post #12

My take:
John Rambo charged through the jungle, firing wildly into the air. Vietcong bodies fell out of the trees, hitting the ground with a thud. "They drew first blood", shouted Rambo. He whipped out a grenade and threw it at the ground in front of him. He jumped above it right as it exploded, propelling him high into the air. He grabbed onto a nearby helicopter and threw the pilot out. He then flew the helicopter into a tank, jumping out at the last second. The two exploded in a tremendous fireball. He called for a nuclear strike at his location, but the president told him it was to dangerous. With the entire Vietcong army closing in on his position, he had little time to react. He grabbed a man climbing out of the flaming wreckage of the tank, and ripped his heart out with his bare hands. Then he crushed it, causing a nuclear fission. The explosion was felt far and wide. Rambo survived to fight another day.

At least I think that's what happened.

tits

May 24 2010, 1:58 am

BiOAtK Post #13

Can I have 25? I honestly tried getting through it and I couldn't. It didn't help that I know someone named Manny with cerebral palsy so I was lolling the whole time, thinking of him.

Manny

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May 24 2010, 2:10 am

LoTu)S Post #14

I laughed at the grammatical errors until I vomited. :lol:

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May 24 2010, 2:20 am Picturesque Post #15

Looks like it could be a pre-school play.

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May 24 2010, 5:40 am

Fire_Kame Post #16

wth is starcraft

Quote from

OlimarandLouie

I'll give 50 minerals to the first person who can rationalize this story and turn it into something that is actually readable with correct grammar.

I can see this turning into a meme:

Quote from name:the script

can you tell me what happen and why your are here.

I'll give someone 50 pesos if they turn it into a decent map plot.

Though, quoting everything poorly worded as [quote=name: the script] would be fairly awesome, too.

May 24 2010, 8:16 pm

DavidJCobb Post #17

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Post has been edited 2 time(s), last time on Jul 5 2018, 4:09 am by DavidJCobb.

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May 25 2010, 3:39 am

dumbducky Post #18

Nah, I think it's about Rambo.

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