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In-Progress Guitar Composition
Aug 29 2009, 6:10 am
By: payne  

Aug 29 2009, 6:10 am payne Post #1

:payne:

I'll update this topic with what I come up with ^^
I started it 30 minutes ago, wondering around and trying random stuff. I am very pleased of it so far. The timing is much in it, so having the tab copied under is somewhat useless, though I want to save it somewhere else than in my mind ;o


e|-2-3-|-2h3p2-----0-|---0-----------0-|-1-|-3p1-3-1-----|
B|-3-3-|-------3p0-1-|---1-1h2p1-----0-|-1-|-----1-1-----|
G|-2-2-|-----------0-|---2-------2p0-0-|-2-|-----0-2-----|
D|-0-0-|-----------2-|---2-----------2-|-3-|-----2-3-----|
A|-----|-0---------3-|---0-----------2-|-3-|-----3-------|
E|-----|-------------|-0-------------0-|-1-|-------------|

It is missing some basses when I am not playing chords and I'm not sure about the one actually in. Anyways, if anyone feel like playing this and want to improve it, any help will be appreciated :D

Post has been edited 4 time(s), last time on Sep 21 2009, 2:46 am by payne.



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Aug 29 2009, 6:52 am Syphon Post #2



The plucked e and the Fmaj at the end don't sound right. It's too late for me to figure out what sounds right, but try something else.

Though I may have played it too slowly.



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Aug 29 2009, 2:58 pm Dapperdan Post #3



After the a minor, it would sound better if you kept your middle finger on the 2nd fret on the d string, instead of picking both opens there. The whole bracketed off f major part really doesn't sound too good in general. This is certainly no conquest of musical composition. :b



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Aug 30 2009, 3:01 am payne Post #4

:payne:

Thanks for help guys! :D
After a lil' weed, I've tried this (didn't have much time xD). (Edited)



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Sep 13 2009, 5:33 am payne Post #5

:payne:

Updated...
What should I do after that pull-off? :S I can't find any nice chord beside an F :O
And do you guys have any tips for compositions? This is pretty much my first try :P



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Sep 21 2009, 2:47 am payne Post #6

:payne:

Anyone to help please?
I really wish some people could give me tips about how to write an instrumental song ;o



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