[img=http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/1068/ereifcopyzd5.jpg] [quote][color=#CE091D] [align=center]Ereif Open Rpg [/color] [/align] [/quote] [quote] [color=#CE091D] [align=center] Map Description [/color] [/align] [color=#81A7EF]Players 3 256X256 Jungle terrain RPG[/color] [/quote] [quote] [color=#CE091D][align=center] Storyline[/align][/color][color=#81A7EF] There once was a great war that separated one great kingdom into two, they were divided by their differences. This war lasted 15 years you my king rose on one side your name is Ereif and you knew that the war would never stop. You decided to separate if we could agree not to do this one evil thing that both of the sides had been doing up too this point. We all agreed and in order to make it final Ereif you knew you had to kill yourself to prove to the people that you and our kingdom would never use this again, it could have saved you my lord if we had used it. So in return of your life Ereif there was one law that kept everyone in common it was called Erief's Law! Now 3000 years later there is sign of this law being used, we must stop them before it gets way out of control. They decided to attack us, because we know if we let Ereif's law be broken another war will be started, sometimes the only way to stop a war.... is too start a war. Rumors of Erief's law scares people. It's been so long since there has even been a whisper of Erief's law. Why now? The kingdom of Ereif must have heir to another king. There is only one man left that is related to the great Erief. That is Promaf son of Cadoith heir of Erief. The kingdom has not been lead by a king for years this could start a civil war in the kingdom of Erief, but the law of Erief MUST NOT BE BROKEN... Death to whoever breaks it. Erief if only you were alive now, Erief guide us in our time of need, grief, suffering, confusion. This i ask you This I NEED YOU FOR! Erief my lord it has been to long since you roamed this earth they have forgotten what really happened during the War of Revision. I have even thought of breaking your law for you my lord, but I know I can't and I won’t. your, trusting servent Crelin son Legiedan heir of Erief. [/color] [/quote] [quote][color=#CE091D][align=center] Game Play [/align][/color] [color=#81A7EF] -New Battle system, Selected who you attack -Skill points, Health, Armor, Attack, Shields, Mana/Stanima, Magic. -Main Story Quest -Many Side quest -Party mode/Solo mode -Many monsters/ Rare monsters -Great Boss fights -PVP -Classes (Start with Fighter or Mystic) Thief, Rouge, Warrior, Dark Night, Gladiator, More! White mage, Summoner, Black mage, Wizard, Dark Wizard more! -Unit upgrade -Houses (Walk in them) -Night and day -Shops - 25 skills... Your character can have 25 skills learned but there is much more out there! -Micro system... Items and skills use a beacon system but you can earn a micro system to make a few skills/items used a little faster! -Help -Allys -You effect your world -Things always changing -Not a walking to one place at a time RPG.. You will be sent back and forth from town to town. -Very long! [/quote][/color] [quote][color=#CE091D][align=center] Progress [/align][/color] [color=#81A7EF] Terrain [progress=1] Triggers [progress=1] Story [progress=75] Side Quest [progress=1] Battle System[progress=23] [/color][/quote] [quote][color=#CE091D][align=center] Screen Shots[/align][/color] [img=http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7033/screen1gf6.jpg] -More! Soon![/quote] [quote][color=#CE091D][align=center] Characters[/align][/color] [color=#81A7EF]Arelir- 32, Male: Your character and he wants to join the elite squad Tanjiun! Erief- Male: A great king a great hero! He lived 3000 years ago and he stopped the war... Now in the worlds time of need he's dead of course but everyone longs for his great wisdom to reign once again on their kingdom! Prokath- 32, Male: Arelir's childhood friend he is always giving Arelir advice, Arelir thinks that Prokath is very wise. Prokath is also already a Tanjiun. Puria- 29, Female: Prokath's wife if you heard the saying who wears the pants in this relationship it is for sure Puria. Arelir is even scared of her! Legeth- 41, Male: General of the militia/army, he is also one of the 5 leaders of the Tanjiun. Arelir needs to get on his good side! Galilas- 91, Male: Galilas plays the role of Arelir's father, he took Arelir in as a very young child because Arelir parents disappeared when he was young. Grigor- 56, Male: The first boss! He is not against you but he does need too test you and your skills! Promaf- 44, Male: He is your very wise and strong king. Crelin- 41, Male: The leader of the other kingdom, which is called Elgrin he is the root of all evil this is who they suspect is trying to use Erief law! [/color][/quote] [color=#CE091D][align=center][quote]Quest![/color][/align] [color=#81A7EF] [align=center] Missions[/align] [align=left]-Pest Control -Saying goodbye -One last test -Walking the shrew -At last the army -Going to camp -The map! -Meeting the general -An old friend returns -Spy games -A new mission for a new person -The secret -The order -The death -Finally the map -Your business is never fun! -The truth -That traitor! -The talk -The fight -The talk and the help -Waiting for the spy -Death of the spy! -Law of Ereif -The real truth -Who's next -Rise against -King Ereif -The battle plan -Rise against -Stop a war -Start a war[/align] [align=center]Chapters[/align] [align=left]Chapter 1: Doing the test Chapter 2: To the east Chapter 3: Rising up to the challenge Chapter 4: Spying on unknown forces Chapter 5: The used Chapter 6: Not letting this happen Chapter 7: Ereif's law Chapter 8: King Ereif we need you Chapter 9: Stopping a war from happening Chapter 10: Sometimes you must start a war in order to stop on Chapter 11: Gather the troops Chapter 12: Tomorrow we fight! Chapter 13: End credits![/quote][/color][/align] So guys i need help throw any ideas at me ask me any questions... Once i get a bit more done i will be take 3-5 Alpha testers!! Screen shots will be added soon!

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Ereif Open Rpg

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Map Description

Players 3
256X256
Jungle terrain

RPG

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Storyline

There once was a great war that separated one great kingdom into two, they were divided by their differences. This war lasted 15 years you my king rose on one side your name is Ereif and you knew that the war would never stop. You decided to separate if we could agree not to do this one evil thing that both of the sides had been doing up too this point. We all agreed and in order to make it final Ereif you knew you had to kill yourself to prove to the people that you and our kingdom would never use this again, it could have saved you my lord if we had used it. So in return of your life Ereif there was one law that kept everyone in common it was called Erief's Law! Now 3000 years later there is sign of this law being used, we must stop them before it gets way out of control. They decided to attack us, because we know if we let Ereif's law be broken another war will be started, sometimes the only way to stop a war.... is too start a war. Rumors of Erief's law scares people. It's been so long since there has even been a whisper of Erief's law. Why now? The kingdom of Ereif must have heir to another king. There is only one man left that is related to the great Erief. That is Promaf son of Cadoith heir of Erief. The kingdom has not been lead by a king for years this could start a civil war in the kingdom of Erief, but the law of Erief MUST NOT BE BROKEN... Death to whoever breaks it. Erief if only you were alive now, Erief guide us in our time of need, grief, suffering, confusion. This i ask you This I NEED YOU FOR! Erief my lord it has been to long since you roamed this earth they have forgotten what really happened during the War of Revision. I have even thought of breaking your law for you my lord, but I know I can't and I won’t.

your, trusting servent Crelin son Legiedan heir of Erief.

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Game Play

-New Battle system, Selected who you attack
-Skill points, Health, Armor, Attack, Shields, Mana/Stanima, Magic.
-Main Story Quest
-Many Side quest
-Party mode/Solo mode
-Many monsters/ Rare monsters
-Great Boss fights
-PVP
-Classes (Start with Fighter or Mystic) Thief, Rouge, Warrior, Dark Night, Gladiator, More! White mage, Summoner, Black mage, Wizard, Dark Wizard more!
-Unit upgrade
-Houses (Walk in them)
-Night and day
-Shops
- 25 skills... Your character can have 25 skills learned but there is much more out there!
-Micro system... Items and skills use a beacon system but you can earn a micro system to make a few skills/items used a little faster!
-Help
-Allys
-You effect your world
-Things always changing
-Not a walking to one place at a time RPG.. You will be sent back and forth from town to town.
-Very long!

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Screen Shots

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Characters

Arelir- 32, Male: Your character and he wants to join the elite squad Tanjiun!
Erief- Male: A great king a great hero! He lived 3000 years ago and he stopped the war... Now in the worlds time of need he's dead of course but everyone longs for his great wisdom to reign once again on their kingdom!
Prokath- 32, Male: Arelir's childhood friend he is always giving Arelir advice, Arelir thinks that Prokath is very wise. Prokath is also already a Tanjiun.
Puria- 29, Female: Prokath's wife if you heard the saying who wears the pants in this relationship it is for sure Puria. Arelir is even scared of her!
Legeth- 41, Male: General of the militia/army, he is also one of the 5 leaders of the Tanjiun. Arelir needs to get on his good side!
Galilas- 91, Male: Galilas plays the role of Arelir's father, he took Arelir in as a very young child because Arelir parents disappeared when he was young.
Grigor- 56, Male: The first boss! He is not against you but he does need too test you and your skills!
Promaf- 44, Male: He is your very wise and strong king.
Crelin- 41, Male: The leader of the other kingdom, which is called Elgrin he is the root of all evil this is who they suspect is trying to use Erief law!

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Quest!

Missions

-Pest Control
-Saying goodbye
-One last test
-Walking the shrew
-At last the army
-Going to camp
-The map!
-Meeting the general
-An old friend returns
-Spy games
-A new mission for a new person
-The secret
-The order
-The death
-Finally the map
-Your business is never fun!
-The truth
-That traitor!
-The talk
-The fight
-The talk and the help
-Waiting for the spy
-Death of the spy!
-Law of Ereif
-The real truth
-Who's next
-Rise against
-King Ereif
-The battle plan
-Rise against
-Stop a war
-Start a war

Chapters

Chapter 1: Doing the test
Chapter 2: To the east
Chapter 3: Rising up to the challenge
Chapter 4: Spying on unknown forces
Chapter 5: The used
Chapter 6: Not letting this happen
Chapter 7: Ereif's law
Chapter 8: King Ereif we need you
Chapter 9: Stopping a war from happening
Chapter 10: Sometimes you must start a war in order to stop on
Chapter 11: Gather the troops
Chapter 12: Tomorrow we fight!
Chapter 13: End credits!

So guys i need help throw any ideas at me ask me any questions... Once i get a bit more done i will be take 3-5 Alpha testers!! Screen shots will be added soon!

Since I saw this map already, am I a tester? :)

Since I saw this map already, am I a tester?

i guess so... echo ha

i guess so... echo ha

Is that storyline thing supposed to be dialogue or monologue? Just a bit of critique, punctuation and correct or verbal grammar would make it seem a lot more... professional. Otherwise, Smells good! Good luck.

Is that storyline thing supposed to be dialogue or monologue? Just a bit of critique, punctuation and correct or verbal grammar would make it seem a lot more... professional. Otherwise, Smells good! Good luck.

It is suppose to be like that... It is a letter! ^-^!

It is suppose to be like that... It is a letter! ^-^!

But it makes it a little hard to understand, and since he is the heir, he should have at least a good education.

But it makes it a little hard to understand, and since he is the heir, he should have at least a good education.

ok.. I fixed a bit of it ><! How is it now!

ok.. I fixed a bit of it ><! How is it now!

Perhaps you should get the map at least 50% done before posting about it.. Things posted at this stage in their creation, at this scale, rarely get finished.

Perhaps you should get the map at least 50% done before posting about it..

Things posted at this stage in their creation, at this scale, rarely get finished.

Well.. you don't know meh ^_^! and... im ganna prob release a SEN beta (Demo) in a month or so... how about you talk about the map thank you!

Well.. you don't know meh ^_^! and... im ganna prob release a SEN beta (Demo) in a month or so... how about you talk about the map thank you!

Interesting. I wonder how you can create so many rooms for the houses though...

Interesting. I wonder how you can create so many rooms for the houses though...

Oh... I was going to have just one place.... for each player and it will create what it needs in that house and then take you there.. So its all in one house but it creates different stuff!...

Oh... I was going to have just one place.... for each player and it will create what it needs in that house and then take you there.. So its all in one house but it creates different stuff!...

[quote=name:Ashamed]Well.. you don't know meh ^_^! and... im ganna prob release a SEN beta (Demo) in a month or so... how about you talk about the map thank you![/quote] I know you ^.^ and you better finish teh map. also, looking forward to the map, sounds really interesting. hit me up if you ever need a tester.

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Well.. you don't know meh ^_^! and... im ganna prob release a SEN beta (Demo) in a month or so... how about you talk about the map thank you!

I know you ^.^

and you better finish teh map. also, looking forward to the map, sounds really interesting. hit me up if you ever need a tester.

[quote=name:Ashamed]Oh... I was going to have just one place.... for each player and it will create what it needs in that house and then take you there.. So its all in one house but it creates different stuff!...[/quote] Logical and interesting. But what about the sprites for tabels (or do you hate sprites like the rest of us) :wtfage:

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Oh... I was going to have just one place.... for each player and it will create what it needs in that house and then take you there.. So its all in one house but it creates different stuff!...

Logical and interesting. But what about the sprites for tabels (or do you hate sprites like the rest of us)

Well.. i use sprites but ><! not there because it wont work lol ><! there is only so much you can do if you have a house system >< in a rpg!

Well.. i use sprites but ><! not there because it wont work lol ><! there is only so much you can do if you have a house system >< in a rpg!

Eeek, I want testing privilages. Moar Testing Privilages!

Eeek, I want testing privilages. Moar Testing Privilages!

Ashamed!!! Looks cool, I like the Health/Mana concept. PvP in a StarCraft RPG is just funny, though. Oh, and can you elaborate on "Micro system... Items and skills use a beacon system but you can earn a micro system to make a few skills/items used a little faster!" Is that supposed to mean you can use both the old "Move a unit to a beacon to activate an ability" method and the "Unload unit from a Shuttle to activate an ability" method?

Ashamed!!!


Looks cool, I like the Health/Mana concept. PvP in a StarCraft RPG is just funny, though.

Oh, and can you elaborate on "Micro system... Items and skills use a beacon system but you can earn a micro system to make a few skills/items used a little faster!" Is that supposed to mean you can use both the old "Move a unit to a beacon to activate an ability" method and the "Unload unit from a Shuttle to activate an ability" method?

Yep... let me explain ><! At first you just have the good old move civ to location... But if you do a quest you get 2 micro skills and then another quest for another 2... an so on! and you get to assign what to each micro.. fire is micro one and potion is micro two.. or potion is micro 1! ><! or anyway you like it!

Yep... let me explain ><! At first you just have the good old move civ to location... But if you do a quest you get 2 micro skills and then another quest for another 2... an so on! and you get to assign what to each micro.. fire is micro one and potion is micro two.. or potion is micro 1! ><! or anyway you like it!

I'm wondering now if there will be a loading code system because the game is supposed to be EPICLY long. Also, will quests be recyled every so often?

I'm wondering now if there will be a loading code system because the game is supposed to be EPICLY long.
Also, will quests be recyled every so often?

I was thinking of doing a loading code! but im not sure yet! it matters how much strings i have at the end of the game! if i do it wont be very epic >< prob just lvl/class/items/skills! we will see or i will just add it on later on! -.- I kinda want it too be more a lets play with friend game instead of a just play with anyone! ><!! Yes there will be some quest that will!

I was thinking of doing a loading code! but im not sure yet! it matters how much strings i have at the end of the game! if i do it wont be very epic >< prob just lvl/class/items/skills! we will see or i will just add it on later on! -.- I kinda want it too be more a lets play with friend game instead of a just play with anyone! ><!!

Yes there will be some quest that will!

[quote=name:Ashamed]I was thinking of doing a loading code! but im not sure yet! it matters how much strings i have at the end of the game! if i do it wont be very epic >< prob just lvl/class/items/skills! we will see or i will just add it on later on! -.- I kinda want it too be more a lets play with friend game instead of a just play with anyone! ><!! Yes there will be some quest that will![/quote] I herd u liek exclamation marks. Anyway this looks nice, it very well may get my ass back into SC if it ever gets finished.

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I was thinking of doing a loading code! but im not sure yet! it matters how much strings i have at the end of the game! if i do it wont be very epic >< prob just lvl/class/items/skills! we will see or i will just add it on later on! -.- I kinda want it too be more a lets play with friend game instead of a just play with anyone! ><!!

Yes there will be some quest that will!

I herd u liek exclamation marks.

Anyway this looks nice, it very well may get my ass back into SC if it ever gets finished.