[Short] Every Day (Topic)

Staredit Network > Forums > Media, Art, and Literature > Topic: [Short] Every Day

[Short] Every Day

Nov 24 2011, 1:55 am
By:

Sand Wraith

Pages: 1

Nov 24 2011, 1:55 am

Sand Wraith Post #1

she/her

A second-person exploration piece that I did for my Writer's Craft course. I hope you enjoy it.

http://kupax.com/files/18515_169l0/You_Every%20Day.pdf

Nov 24 2011, 2:57 am

ClansAreForGays Post #2

Meh. Should have been 2 pages at the most. Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.

http://waitbutwhy.com/2013/09/why-generation-y-yuppies-are-unhappy.html
"We're being taught to hate downwards"

Nov 24 2011, 3:08 am

Sand Wraith Post #3

she/her

What I should have done was make it reaaaaaaaaally long, drawn-out, and dull to reflect the content. yeaaaa, am i marrying form and content correctly yet????

Also:

Quote

Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.

iknowthatfeelbro.jpg

-

As always, thanks for commenting.

Nov 24 2011, 4:08 am

TiKels Post #4

I really enjoyed this one.

"If a topic that clearly interest noone needs to be closed to underline the "we don't want this here" message, is up to debate."

-NudeRaider

Nov 24 2011, 4:15 am ubermctastic Post #5

Nice, was hoping to see something about staredit lol

None.

Nov 27 2011, 5:31 am 3FFA Post #6

Great.... I was just about to go to sleep too.... if I start thinking like this tomorrow and kill myself I blame you. :-(

-in other words, awesome job.

None.

Nov 27 2011, 5:36 am

Raitaki Post #7

Second person POV? You sure you didn't rip this off some forum game? :awesome:

None.

Feb 17 2012, 3:36 pm

Dapperdan Post #8

Quote

Oh, but what is this? You do not wish to wake yet?

No one thinks like this. Instead of trying to be fancy, use a more natural diction. It will be far more effective. If you want to try to rewrite this, then this is my advice for the whole piece.

None.

Options

Pages: 1

Back to forum
Please log in to reply to this topic or to report it.
Members in this topic: None.

Global Shoutbox

[10:53 pm]

Oh_Man -- https://youtu.be/MHOZptE-_-c are yall seeing this map? it's insane

[2024-5-04. : 1:05 am]

Vrael -- I won't stand for people going around saying things like im not a total madman

[2024-5-04. : 1:05 am]

Vrael -- that's better

[2024-5-04. : 12:39 am]

NudeRaider -- can confirm, Vrael is a total madman

[2024-5-03. : 10:18 pm]

Vrael -- who says I'm not a total madman?

[2024-5-03. : 2:26 pm]

UndeadStar -- Vrael, since the ad messages get removed, you look like a total madman for someone that come late

[2024-5-02. : 1:19 pm]

Vrael -- IM GONNA MANUFACTURE SOME SPORTBALL EQUIPMENT WHERE THE SUN DONT SHINE BOY

[2024-5-02. : 1:35 am]

Ultraviolet -- Vrael

Vrael shouted: NEED SOME SPORTBALL> WE GOT YOUR SPORTBALL EQUIPMENT MANUFACTURING

Gonna put deez sportballs in your mouth

[2024-5-01. : 1:24 pm]

Vrael -- NEED SOME SPORTBALL> WE GOT YOUR SPORTBALL EQUIPMENT MANUFACTURING

[2024-4-30. : 5:08 pm]

Oh_Man -- https://youtu.be/lGxUOgfmUCQ

Please log in to shout.

Members Online:

Roy,

NudeRaider