A second-person exploration piece that I did for my Writer's Craft course. I hope you enjoy it.
http://kupax.com/files/18515_169l0/You_Every%20Day.pdf
Meh. Should have been 2 pages at the most. Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.
What I should have done was make it reaaaaaaaaally long, drawn-out, and dull to reflect the content. yeaaaa, am i marrying form and content correctly yet????
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Probably would have completely hated it if I couldn't relate to it as much as I could.
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As always, thanks for commenting.
I really enjoyed this one.
"If a topic that clearly interest noone needs to be closed to underline the "we don't want this here" message, is up to debate."
-NudeRaider
Nice, was hoping to see something about staredit lol
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Great.... I was just about to go to sleep too.... if I start thinking like this tomorrow and kill myself I blame you.
-in other words, awesome job.
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Second person POV? You sure you didn't rip this off some forum game?
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Oh, but what is this? You do not wish to wake yet?
No one thinks like this. Instead of trying to be fancy, use a more natural diction. It will be far more effective. If you want to try to rewrite this, then this is my advice for the whole piece.
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