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Writing Styles: Mine
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Jul 16 2011, 8:23 pm
By: TiKels  

Jul 16 2011, 8:23 pm TiKels Post #1



I was prodded by a moderator for my writing style/maturity/appropriateness/whatever and I really wanted to hear some legitimate constructive (key word) criticisms so that I could improve.

I could post some examples but I think that you all could just search my topics.

Edit: I meant moderator, i often say one instead of the other.

Post has been edited 2 time(s), last time on Jul 16 2011, 8:36 pm by TiKels.



"If a topic that clearly interest noone needs to be closed to underline the "we don't want this here" message, is up to debate."

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Jul 16 2011, 8:27 pm DevliN Post #2

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Quote from TiKels
I was prodded by an admin
On another site...?

What are you looking to get out of this, ultimately? I ask because I don't think SEN will make you more mature, if that's an issue.

I would include whatever posts you were criticized for so we would have a place to start. Having us look up your posts isn't that great.



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Jul 16 2011, 8:38 pm TiKels Post #3



Make topics that wont get locked.



"If a topic that clearly interest noone needs to be closed to underline the "we don't want this here" message, is up to debate."

-NudeRaider

Jul 16 2011, 9:01 pm DevliN Post #4

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I don't know what that would have to do with your writing style. That has more to do with making topics that are worth keeping open.

http://www.staredit.net/topic/14053/ is the only topic in recent months that has been closed. Unless NR gave you some other reason, that doesn't seem like it has to do with your style. That's a matter of making a silly topic in Lite Discussion regarding a subject that would be better suited for a doctor or medical professional.

So again, I don't really understand what you're trying to get from this ultimately. Perhaps don't consider SEN to be a community where you can make new topics specifically about you and some personal issue you're having. I understand that SEN seems more like a large group of friends than some regular gaming community, but we are trying to keep some rules enforced. :)



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Jul 16 2011, 9:27 pm NudeRaider Post #5

We can't explain the universe, just describe it; and we don't know whether our theories are true, we just know they're not wrong. >Harald Lesch

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That has more to do with making topics that are worth keeping open.
Nice summary of the PM I just sent to Tikels. :P

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So again, I don't really understand what you're trying to get from this ultimately.
Officially? He wants us to cite the rules his post broke so he can make eligible topics.
Unofficially? He wants to bitch about having been moderated.

Quote from DevliN
that doesn't seem like it has to do with your style.
Mostly. Writing style usually refers to something different. It's about which kinds of words you use, how you form sentences and stuff like that.
However style can also mean kind of humor, use of irony or metaphors. And here lies another problem (besides uninteresting / badly presented content): The staff doesn't seem to share your kind of humor, so you might want to go easy on that in your posts, Tikels. ;)




Jul 16 2011, 11:38 pm DevliN Post #6

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I guess with that, we can add another locked topic to the cause. :awesomesauce:



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