Hi I just made a map cause I have nothing to do all day and if you would please give me your tips, suggestions, and what to do. Sorry I couldn't make a picture, my computer busts up and says Internal System Command Error when i try to put it on photobucket. I got the picture on pb here's the url http://s224.photobucket.com/albums/dd107/JasonZhan/?action=view&current=Purnima11.jpg

Hi I just made a map cause I have nothing to do all day and if you would please give me your tips, suggestions, and what to do.

Sorry I couldn't make a picture, my computer busts up and says Internal System Command Error when i try to put it on photobucket.

I got the picture on pb here's the url

http://s224.photobucket.com/albums/dd107/JasonZhan/?action=view&current=Purnima11.jpg

I just noticed a mistake in the minerals, my brother keeps on annoying me when I try to do stuff on the computer.

I just noticed a mistake in the minerals, my brother keeps on annoying me when I try to do stuff on the computer.

I assume the top and bottom are the mains. You have way too much gas before that bridge. Two is even alot on a setup like that. Keep in mind you should never have a gas expansion within the main base's choke unless you compensate with something else (which I doubt the majority can do propery). That's a large middle, and I kind of like it. Too bad it disallows proficient expansion layouts..

I assume the top and bottom are the mains.
You have way too much gas before that bridge. Two is even alot on a setup like that. Keep in mind you should never have a gas expansion within the main base's choke unless you compensate with something else (which I doubt the majority can do propery).

That's a large middle, and I kind of like it. Too bad it disallows proficient expansion layouts..

There isn't really a gas at the back door expansions. On the actual file it's just a mineral only. I think Moon forgot to edit the picture.

There isn't really a gas at the back door expansions. On the actual file it's just a mineral only. I think Moon forgot to edit the picture.

Thank you for letting me know.

Thank you for letting me know.

Or maybe I forgot to edit the map? Hmm which one is it? I'll let you decide...

Or maybe I forgot to edit the map? Hmm which one is it? I'll let you decide...

Well, that would be illogical. I won't even bother explaining. As for the map, I don't see any racial imbalances, though I'm still sort of new to mapping, so I don't really know. For aesthetics, all your deco is symmetrical, your bridges are really blocky (if you look closely in the editor), and a few more subtle doodads would be nice.

Well, that would be illogical. I won't even bother explaining.

As for the map, I don't see any racial imbalances, though I'm still sort of new to mapping, so I don't really know. For aesthetics, all your deco is symmetrical, your bridges are really blocky (if you look closely in the editor), and a few more subtle doodads would be nice.

You shouldn't put a gas in your second expo. That'd be too much of a Zerg advantage.

You shouldn't put a gas in your second expo. That'd be too much of a Zerg advantage.

I don't think it poses a big problem. The distance between the main and the nat has a significant distance, the set up is just like baekmagoji in resource placements, as in terrain, it looks unique. I'll be willing to testing this out.

I don't think it poses a big problem. The distance between the main and the nat has a significant distance, the set up is just like baekmagoji in resource placements, as in terrain, it looks unique. I'll be willing to testing this out.