Negative One
Jan 14 2008, 5:50 am
By: ToA  

Jan 14 2008, 5:50 am ToA Post #1

Que Sera, Sera.

Im turning this into a real song, music and all that, soon. Im just working on a few things.

Negative One

One Boy, One Girl, One giant world. One question, and the answer isn't pleasant.


One Broken Heart, One bad day starts. He took a chance to change it, but couldn't rearrange it.

One Boy, One Girl, One giant world


One Boy, One Girl, One giant world

Now more many years long gone, both of them are barley hanging on, both of them regret that decision they made.

One boy, one girl, and one huge mistake.




Jan 14 2008, 8:42 am candle12345 Post #2



Short, but I'm guessing this is the chorus?
Since there's no music attached, I can't really say how good it is.
I'll keep an eye on it though.



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Jan 14 2008, 11:30 pm Fisty Post #3



I loled...it sounds like a rhyme you would hear in SexEd (no offense)



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Jan 16 2008, 12:34 am Fierce Post #4



Emo much?



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