Yggdrasill: Tree of Genesis, Ragnarök: Corruption's beginning
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payne
Jun 30 2009, 9:56 pm
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Yggdrasill: Tree of Genesis A scandinavian's mythology based RPG by bg-payne ----- Terrain map: File: Yggdrasill: Tree of Genesis This post was edited 26 times, last edit by payne: Nov 21 2011, 5:20 am. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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killer_sss
Jun 30 2009, 10:37 pm
Post #4 Commanda_Panda Jun 30 2009, 11:54 pm
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payne
Jul 1 2009, 1:09 am
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In fact, I just wanted to be sure I'd have something with a minimum of depth to work with so I did the storyline. Next step is terrain; I want to be sure that I can make it fit the storyline and then, once that's done, I'll start working on the systems so yes, so far, nothing much planned for the interesting part for map makers, sorry
As Kaias have said, I should use many things I had planned for my D2 map Sorry for posting something without many informations. By the way, the tree in the screenshot isn't the ToG It's that I had found that the actual blend of this corner could act as a trunk.The Tree of Genesis should look much more like something like this: ![]() EDIT: Btw, spell check found no error in my text except "lol" and "ToG"... This post was edited 1 time, last edit by payne: Jul 1 2009, 1:17 am. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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ForTheSwarm
Jul 1 2009, 1:31 am
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1. Strange word choice since it means "to ask". If the king wanted everyone there, he would have commanded them, not asked. 2. Not a commonly used word, although it fits. 3. Since it is the king, the better term would be "subjects", since "fellows" makes it sound like the players and king are on the same level, when the king is likely higher. 4. Just "King" will do here. The 's should be removed, as it makes no sense. 5. Obscure = unclear. Not the most scary term. Try using a stronger word, such as horrible, horrifying, or devastating. 6. Remove "actually", it is unnecessary and somewhat confusing. 7. It's "it's", not "its". its = something that it owns, it's = it is 8. Should be "worse and worse", not "worst and worst". I could find more, but I won't unless you ask me to. This post was edited 1 time, last edit by ForTheSwarm: Jul 1 2009, 1:53 am. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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ForTheSwarm
Jul 1 2009, 1:52 am
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Tempz
Jul 1 2009, 3:08 am
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What a caterpillar calls death a master calls a butterfly.
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Seems interesting, only problem is that tree is in the Diablo map.
Anyways I could make a tree sample if you like... If not ill keep it for my own map. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Truth hurts. Maybe not as much as jumping on a bicycle with a seat missing, but it hurts.
- Drebin (Naked Gun 2 1/2) Pm me for terrain requests (Jungle mostly) |
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killer_sss
Jul 1 2009, 3:43 am
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this wasn't at all to what i was refering. I didn't understand why he could use complex words but couldn't use basic ones. Tail was used to say he told someone a story. The correct word should be tale. He also used worst and worst for worse and worse. Those are just a couple of examples. Wasn't trying to affend you. Keep working on your english you are doing well. try grammar checks if your program has them. they may help fix some of your problems. Spell checkers won't catch many of the errors you have. English language is a pain because there are so many rules. "i before e except after c" is the rule that tells it all lol. This is always try except in this case lol. stupid english. This post was edited 1 time, last edit by killer_sss: Jul 1 2009, 3:49 am. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Post #12 Commanda_Panda Jul 1 2009, 4:02 am
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A messenger of the King (name = ?) comes to query(1) each player at their living place saying the king is convoking(2) all his fellows(3) for an important speech. Once arrived at the castle (separately: they don't know each other yet), the King's(4) has already started to speak: the sages are predicting an obscure(5) reign of terror all around the world because the Tree of Genesis is actually(6) unhealthy and its(7) getting worst and worst(8)! 1. Strange word choice since it means "to ask". If the king wanted everyone there, he would have commanded them, not asked. 2. Not a commonly used word, although it fits. 3. Since it is the king, the better term would be "subjects", since "fellows" makes it sound like the players and king are on the same level, when the king is likely higher. 4. Just "King" will do here. The 's should be removed, as it makes no sense. 5. Obscure = unclear. Not the most scary term. Try using a stronger word, such as horrible, horrifying, or devastating. 6. Remove "actually", it is unnecessary and somewhat confusing. 7. It's "it's", not "its". its = something that it owns, it's = it is 8. Should be "worse and worse", not "worst and worst". I could find more, but I won't unless you ask me to. this wasn't at all to what i was refering. I didn't understand why he could use complex words but couldn't use basic ones. Tail was used to say he told someone a story. The correct word should be tale. He also used worst and worst for worse and worse. Those are just a couple of examples. Wasn't trying to affend you. Keep working on your english you are doing well. try grammar checks if your program has them. they may help fix some of your problems. Spell checkers won't catch many of the errors you have. English language is a pain because there are so many rules. "i before e except after c" is the rule that tells it all lol. This is always try except in this case lol. stupid english. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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killer_sss
Jul 1 2009, 4:45 am
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Tempz
Jul 1 2009, 6:18 am
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What a caterpillar calls death a master calls a butterfly.
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I've got a rough of the final copy although it took my a while to make this, it's still subjected to change.
Well Each Tree Took About 45 Mins deducting the time i spent watching tv (Total 2 - 3 hourish) I'm still working on some custom blends for my own pet project(s) So Far I've Got (Warning Huge Pictures) Click On Pics To See Epic Image(s) Best Project So Far (Working on Larger Trunk) (8X9) (Still A Bit Chunky XD)"I Like My Soup Chunky", Chunky Sirlon Soup Fills You Up Right" Treeless (No Leafs) - Closed & Open Respectively (12 X 18) Pre 1 Tree Regular Tree (Leafs) - Closed & Open Respectively (12 X 18) Pre 1 Tree This Took Apx 1H 30 Mins ;( Edit : Using the base idea from the other tree's i've managed to create another tree I'm still working on... (Very Rough Stages) Even so ill give my older versions if you like so you work with it and see what comes out. Sorry I Can't give it out though (If it takes me more then a few hours ill keep for myself) but ill give you another variation of it if you like. Just because it takes so much work to terrain something this big. This post was edited 6 times, last edit by Tempz: Jul 1 2009, 7:18 am. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Truth hurts. Maybe not as much as jumping on a bicycle with a seat missing, but it hurts.
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lil-Inferno
Jul 1 2009, 6:38 am
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Tempz
Jul 1 2009, 6:52 am
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What a caterpillar calls death a master calls a butterfly.
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XD, as of now i never heard to Deku til I google'd it.
Anyways no because the top leafy part is too large on deku. As well as the fact Deku has a face. I was trying to go more of a "Baku Tree" Baku Is more or less Deku's Rival - More ominous but there generally the same http://zelda.wikia.com/wiki/Great_Deku_Tree http://zelda.wikia.com/wiki/Bagu_Tree ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Truth hurts. Maybe not as much as jumping on a bicycle with a seat missing, but it hurts.
- Drebin (Naked Gun 2 1/2) Pm me for terrain requests (Jungle mostly) |
Post #18
payne
Jul 1 2009, 11:34 am
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Anyone that wants to help me out might want to take a look here.
And thank you for all your support I'm working hard to learn english well since it's so useful By the way, I can tell you French is even worse in terms of (so it's worse, not worst heh?) exceptions and rules :S ;P ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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xYoshix
Jul 1 2009, 1:47 pm
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I've got a rough of the final copy although it took my a while to make this, it's still subjected to change. Well Each Tree Took About 45 Mins deducting the time i spent watching tv (Total 2 - 3 hourish) I'm still working on some custom blends for my own pet project(s) So Far I've Got (Warning Huge Pictures) Click On Pics To See Epic Image(s) Best Project So Far (Working on Larger Trunk) (8X9) (Still A Bit Chunky XD)"I Like My Soup Chunky", Chunky Sirlon Soup Fills You Up Right" Treeless (No Leafs) - Closed & Open Respectively (12 X 18) Pre 1 Tree Regular Tree (Leafs) - Closed & Open Respectively (12 X 18) Pre 1 Tree This Took Apx 1H 30 Mins ;( Edit : Using the base idea from the other tree's i've managed to create another tree I'm still working on... (Very Rough Stages) Even so ill give my older versions if you like so you work with it and see what comes out. Sorry I Can't give it out though (If it takes me more then a few hours ill keep for myself) but ill give you another variation of it if you like. Just because it takes so much work to terrain something this big. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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Tempz
Jul 1 2009, 10:01 pm
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What a caterpillar calls death a master calls a butterfly.
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The bottom 2 aren't really tress... there just samples so i can get to the final project...
Top one is a huge improvment. Those are supposed to be.....Trees? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Truth hurts. Maybe not as much as jumping on a bicycle with a seat missing, but it hurts.
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