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Seventy Times Seven acoustic cover
Nov 30 2008, 6:34 am
By: ToA  

Nov 30 2008, 6:34 am ToA Post #1

Que Sera, Sera.

I did an acoustic cover of seventy times seven by brand new, i didn't include the solo cause i cant get as far down as i need to on my acoustic guitar's frets.

i'll have a 10x better full band cover/recorded on a better microphone coming in some weeks.

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Nov 30 2008, 6:45 am Madroc Post #2



Nice, you've got a good voice. Very nice. Sounds really great. A suggestion, you can improve the quality DRASTICALLY I've found by focusing harder to get the intonation perfect on every note, even the ones that don't sound very important when you hear yourself sing it.

I should put some of my covers on here to have you guys listen to.




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Nov 30 2008, 7:20 am Excalibur Post #3

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I'm with holding comment until I hear you do this on a better mic. I can tell a lot of what sounds bad is the mic's fault. Also you sound a little congested and nasally and I'm not sure if that's you or the mic.




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Nov 30 2008, 12:14 pm Lord Malvanis Post #4



Wow really great songs! 5/5 10/10 is there a download for them or are you waiting for album to finish?



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Nov 30 2008, 7:19 pm Excalibur Post #5

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Quote from Lord Malvanis
Wow really great songs! 5/5 10/10 is there a download for them or are you waiting for album to finish?
And my respect for you drops even lower. I think you need your ears checked, as they both had a lot of problems.




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Nov 30 2008, 8:00 pm Lord Malvanis Post #6



Everyone has a different opinion Excaliber, not everyone will like the same thing you do.
That's why people are "different" and "unique"



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Nov 30 2008, 8:09 pm Corbo Post #7

ALL PRAISE YOUR SUPREME LORD CORBO

I agree. Some people will like things that suck and some people will like actually good things.
And Excalibur wasn't stating a liking or disliking for the songm he was just pointing out there was mistakes and faults in the performance made.

As for me, I won't give any adivce or anything at all, I have tried before to make this kid understand but he's just too stuborn to listen and I recommend you Ex to not waste your time either.



fuck you all

Nov 30 2008, 8:22 pm Dapperdan Post #8



Quit the trolling everyone.

I agree with Excalibur. The mic isn't very good. Sometimes you can't keep up with the lyrics and don't finish all the words. The part with multiple voices (the first time especially) at once does not work. Honestly I don't know how to give advice for this. The vocals just aren't that good. Not that I could do better.



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Nov 30 2008, 9:23 pm Excalibur Post #9

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Quote from Corbo
As for me, I won't give any adivce or anything at all, I have tried before to make this kid understand but he's just too stuborn to listen and I recommend you Ex to not waste your time either.
I know, but I owe it to Brand New and all the other good artists' songs hes going to cover to try.
When can we expect the better mic version ToA?




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Nov 30 2008, 11:40 pm Falkoner Post #10



I don't know the song, so maybe that's the problem, but it just sounds like you're talking for most of it, all you need to do is get past that little hill in your voice and it improves your singing like crazy. Once again, I don't know the song, so maybe it just sounds like that.



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Dec 1 2008, 12:25 am Excalibur Post #11

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Actual song for comparison: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TYzmR-8a9u0




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Dec 4 2008, 6:35 am BlueWolf Post #12



Excalibur is right, you do sound nasally. The double voice part was aweful... sorry about that. Hey, atleast you can sing better then me.



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Dec 4 2008, 7:39 pm ClansAreForGays Post #13



I can tell your changing your voice through the first 15 seconds so I stopped listening. It sounded like when a your friend totally changes their voice when a cute girl is talking to them. I'm sure lots of good singers do this(Tom Delunge[sic?]), but when it's obvious then it stop being good. Just sing the way you naturally sound, just think about all the bands we'd never have if they all tried to sound cool when singing.(Coheed, Alkaline Trio, CuteIWWAF, MotionCity, NFG, Reggie&fulleffect, Saosin, Senses Fail, but MOST of all Something Corporate) Embrace your nasal.




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