[COLOR=#86EE59]Map Details[/COLOR] [quote=Map Details] [COLOR=#CE091D] Game Name: RISIN RPG Map Size: 256x256 Players: 5 [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Main Character[/COLOR] [quote=Characters] [COLOR=#EBEE80] Name - Race - Unit - HP Elliot - Trapt - Terran Marine - N/A Kao - Prosin - Protoss Zealot - N/A Cruz - Trapt - Terran Firebat - N/A Phil - Zexton - Terran Ghost - N/A Jen - Zexton - Protoss Templar - N/A [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]NPC's of RISIN[/COLOR] [quote=NPC] [COLOR=#86EE59] Bernard - Bar Owner Sarah - Bounty Office Manager Shofer - Jail Prison Guard Smiley - Doctor at Medic Center Ronin - Mortallic Mines Owner Towns people -More will be added- [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]In-Game Races[/COLOR] [quote=Races] [COLOR=#DFA51C] Name - SC Race - Description Trapt - Terran - Known for there War Habit's. Prosin - Protoss - The most Advanced Race. Zexton - Terran/Protoss - Has a Population Problem. [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Main Objective[/COLOR] [quote=Objective] [COLOR=#86EE59] The main Objective is to find different breed's of Minerals outside of the shelter. You must teleport the minerals back to the shelter. After you teleport the minerals back to the shelter, Dr. Crane will ask you to help him with making the minerals into Fuel. This is a Random Process witch means you must combine different type's of Minerals to make a Substance like Fuel. This might take you 30 mins to 20 hour's if not combine'd correctly. And you must wear a Oxygen Level iMeter, witch calculates the Oxygen you need and coolness. This System will be more discussed in the System part. [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Game Systems[/COLOR] [quote=Objective] [COLOR=#81A7EF] Name - Description One Life, One Revive System: You only get one life during this whole entire RPG game. You do get One Revive witch requires Two Different Minerals to be combined witch comes later into play. So if you die early in the game you must wait a vary long time to get revived back. Bounty System: * Still being Planned out, but be sure there will be one! * Oxygen Level iMeter: Described in the Main Objectives Section, this system Calculates the Oxygen you need and coolness, but there is a down side, It run's out after awhile. How this system will work is you must go to the ' Oxygen Mortallic Shop, and Fill up your ' iMeter ' the amount to fill-up goes up to 10. x amount of time goes by and it will decrease at a certain rate not determined yet. Mailing and Teleportation System: As in the storyline Researchers before you have implanted a substanciel amount of Teleporters on this planet. When you retrieve a Mineral, you must send it back to the shelter ASAP. If you do not have a Mineral to Teleport, or your running vary low on your iMeter you have the ability to teleport back to town and then go back to where you teleported from so you do not need to walk back to where you were. Healing System: There is a healing Medical center, least I can do sence im only going to give you one life to live. "haha". It is in the shelter and it is run by Mr. Smiley Dr. at the Hospital. He is a vary great and funny doctor, he will heal your wounds and let you rest for the night. Jail System: Kill a NPC, Kill a Teammate, - still updating - " you get thrown in jail for x amount of time " Level System: Yes there is a leveling system! How to gain level's is undetermined right now. but there is 10 different levels. and each level you gain, your health will raise. You can be sure that each level will be difficult to obtain. *up for suggestions* Reminder System: If you forget what quest, bounty, or whatever your doing you can always get reminded by ' R24 ' along with TIP's. [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Progress[/COLOR] [quote=Progress] [COLOR=#86EE59]Healing System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=100][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Oxygen Level iMeter System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=100][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]One Life System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=50][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Shelter:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=25][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Terrain:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=10][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Triggers:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=7][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Level System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=5][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Bounty System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=1][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Teleporting System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC]0%[PROGRESS=1][/COLOR] [COLOR=#86EE59]Jail System:[/COLOR] [COLOR=#C876DC][PROGRESS=1][/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Updates Of Map and Current Information[/COLOR] [quote=Updates Of Map and Current Information] [COLOR=#81A7EF] News: Im not going to be posting Screen Shot's for awhile, because Im working on trigger's mostly, and the terrain I am doing is just rough draft if you will. Once I come close to finishing map I will have someone do terrain, because I come to find if I try to work on terrain I get extremley bored of the map and quit making it! so now im going to do trigger's only and worry about terrain last. : ) News & Updates: - N/A Map Additions: + Added a new System " Reminder System ". + Added Better Shelter Terrain " Still Needs Touch up ". + Added Each brief for Each Player giving Tip's. [/COLOR] [/quote] [COLOR=#86EE59]Screen Shots[/COLOR] [quote=Screen Shots] [COLOR=#C876DC] I have made some change's to terrain, this will be the official terrain * Can be change'd at anytime * [url=http://img511.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rarpr9.png][img=http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/83/rarpr9.th.png][/url] [URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img511.imageshack.us/img511/83/rarpr9.png[/IMG][/URL] [/color] [/quote]

I hope the production map has better spelling and grammar. Interesting. A 2000-year backstory to explain that you're just doing a search mission?

I hope the production map has better spelling and grammar.

Interesting. A 2000-year backstory to explain that you're just doing a search mission?

Wow could you summarize that man. Thats too long.

Wow could you summarize that man. Thats too long.

Yeah I really can't read all that... It's a game, not a novel :lol: But If you bolded some key points and added topic headers I might consider it ^^ And as for the little bit I read, you know there's a spell check right? :P

Yeah I really can't read all that... It's a game, not a novel But If you bolded some key points and added topic headers I might consider it And as for the little bit I read, you know there's a spell check right?

Yha spell check for sure, but I did say *NOTE* there will be error's LOl =] and yha! I could have went several way's but each time I kept writing idea's pop'd in my head. but if it wasnt going to be research the story probably would have kept going, and the story line is more of the rpg style, sence the game is rpg, Role-Playing, and of course some game mission's are going to be refere'd to the story, I'll get more in-detail as I progress into Closed-Beta alpha when I need some tester's.

Yha spell check for sure, but I did say *NOTE* there will be error's LOl =]
and yha! I could have went several way's but each time I kept writing idea's pop'd in my head.

but if it wasnt going to be research the story probably would have kept going, and the story line is more of the rpg style, sence the game is rpg, Role-Playing, and of course some game mission's are going to be refere'd to the story,

I'll get more in-detail as I progress into Closed-Beta alpha when I need some tester's.

ok cool cool! So this story is all original? wow its a good story board :) I'm excited to watch this map develop and take form! Good luck with everything :)

ok cool cool! So this story is all original? wow its a good story board I'm excited to watch this map develop and take form! Good luck with everything

I updated more stuff so you guys will have more of an idea of what im trying to make and of course more will be added and CHANGED! hehe =]

I updated more stuff so you guys will have more of an idea of what im trying to make

and of course more will be added and CHANGED! hehe =]

Haha ok alright that is what I wanted to see! :) And I actually read all of it lol!!!!! k well it sounds good so far, but how are your map making skills? have you made any maps already and if so can i check it out to see how good you are? and is it going to have custom terrain? Are there going to be cut scenes? Am I asking too many questions? :lol: Ok so those are just some of the concerns I have :) As for your updated storyboard, here's a list of things you really should fix(:P): -all of the words like "agree'd" , "work'd" , and "suck'd" really need to just have an "e" instead of the [']mark. Haha so like "agreed" "worked" "sucked" -This needs to be reworded, "If you do not accept the bounty and kill the person you can't" I get what your saying but it sounds like knives are stabbing at my ears... Maybe say, "You cannot kill a bounty until you have accepted the job, because..." see? :) -"Oxygen doesn't need to be capitalized -"to refill up" redundant, remove "up" -"witch" should be "which" -"researcher's" doesn't need the ['] -"almost [I]got[/I] extinct" needs to be became -and plenty of commas and periods could be added/removed but i'll let you slide haha :lol: And no, I neither teach English, nor do I want to but I had to correct you because it was killing me :D

Haha ok alright that is what I wanted to see! And I actually read all of it lol!!!!! k well it sounds good so far, but how are your map making skills? have you made any maps already and if so can i check it out to see how good you are? and is it going to have custom terrain? Are there going to be cut scenes? Am I asking too many questions?

Ok so those are just some of the concerns I have As for your updated storyboard, here's a list of things you really should fix( ):
-all of the words like "agree'd" , "work'd" , and "suck'd" really need to just have an "e" instead of the [']mark. Haha so like "agreed" "worked" "sucked"

-This needs to be reworded, "If you do not accept the bounty and kill the person you can't" I get what your saying but it sounds like knives are stabbing at my ears... Maybe say, "You cannot kill a bounty until you have accepted the job, because..." see?

-"Oxygen doesn't need to be capitalized

-"to refill up" redundant, remove "up"

-"witch" should be "which"

-"researcher's" doesn't need the [']

-"almost got extinct" needs to be became

-and plenty of commas and periods could be added/removed but i'll let you slide haha

And no, I neither teach English, nor do I want to but I had to correct you because it was killing me

[quote=Jello-Jigglers]Haha ok alright that is what I wanted to see! :) And I actually read all of it lol!!!!! k well it sounds good so far, but how are your map making skills? have you made any maps already and if so can i check it out to see how good you are? and is it going to have custom terrain? Are there going to be cut scenes? Am I asking too many questions? :lol: [/quote] My map making skills, Im vary knowledgable about map making I have been in plenty of map making clans. though I only trully really made around 3 maps witch were vary easy because 2 of them were bound's and 1 was a defence that got stolen from me. blue bound, just recenlty I logg'd on starcraft and seen someone play it, that got me realll excited!!! :D because I made that map when I was in Clan Oo. I made another bound conquer bound when I first realsed it, I seen alot of people making it then I guess it just died down just like all other bounds. and Nazi Defence. Yes Im the orginal maker want to fight it?, I know because I was stupid for public testing, and after I had no access to a computer when I came back I seen that someone had Nazi Defence, and they had the backwards Schwatizica how I had it and same Desert Layout. so yha, Nazi Defence is all me it just got jacked : ( and also the clans I been in Mp)@West - Map Producers [ Mp)LuPiN ] KoE)@West - Knights Of Eden [ KoE)LuPiN ] (U)@West - Unknown [ LuPiN(U) ] Oo. - Obstacle Onslaught? I forgot Lol - [ Oo.LuPiN.oO ] Clan Chef - [ GTi ] Although it's not impressive in getting into 'almost' every mapmaking clan because anyone can do it but that's just to show, how long I been around this map making buieness : ) And No im not doing extended terrain to much time, yha it would make the game look pretty, but im for fun, I dont want to spend a year on terrain because im slow at extended terrain. and I can't rely on anyone doing it. so Let's just hope it's going to be fun! =] p.s: I should spell right, but you can thank starcraft chat for making me type the way I do. No one type's correct on StarCraft : ( I just got the speed! haha

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Haha ok alright that is what I wanted to see! And I actually read all of it lol!!!!! k well it sounds good so far, but how are your map making skills? have you made any maps already and if so can i check it out to see how good you are? and is it going to have custom terrain? Are there going to be cut scenes? Am I asking too many questions?

My map making skills, Im vary knowledgable about map making I have been in plenty of map making clans. though I only trully really made around 3 maps witch were vary easy because 2 of them were bound's and 1 was a defence that got stolen from me.

blue bound, just recenlty I logg'd on starcraft and seen someone play it, that got me realll excited!!! because I made that map when I was in Clan Oo.
I made another bound conquer bound when I first realsed it, I seen alot of people making it then I guess it just died down just like all other bounds.

and Nazi Defence. Yes Im the orginal maker want to fight it?, I know because I was stupid for public testing, and after I had no access to a computer when I came back I seen that someone had Nazi Defence, and they had the backwards Schwatizica how I had it and same Desert Layout. so yha, Nazi Defence is all me it just got jacked : (

and also the clans I been in
Mp)@West - Map Producers [ Mp)LuPiN ]
KoE)@West - Knights Of Eden [ KoE)LuPiN ]
(U)@West - Unknown [ LuPiN(U) ]
Oo. - Obstacle Onslaught? I forgot Lol - [ Oo.LuPiN.oO ]
Clan Chef - [ GTi ]

Although it's not impressive in getting into 'almost' every mapmaking clan because anyone can do it but that's just to show, how long I been around this map making buieness : )

And No im not doing extended terrain to much time, yha it would make the game look pretty, but im for fun, I dont want to spend a year on terrain because im slow at extended terrain. and I can't rely on anyone doing it. so Let's just hope it's going to be fun! =]


p.s: I should spell right, but you can thank starcraft chat for making me type the way I do. No one type's correct on StarCraft : ( I just got the speed! haha

Lol, so you're GTi? I remember recruiting you in CheF and disappearing like a few days after. This map seems like an interesting RPG but what is the point of the races contradicting with the starcraft races? This map reminds me of Page RPG, in which they have to find missing parts.

Lol, so you're GTi? I remember recruiting you in CheF and disappearing like a few days after. This map seems like an interesting RPG but what is the point of the races contradicting with the starcraft races? This map reminds me of Page RPG, in which they have to find missing parts.

Yha, I was going through some trouble with school ^_^ haha damn school! [quote=EcHo]what is the point of the races contradicting with the starcraft races? [/quote] I was basicly just saying that protoss = Prosin like Trapt can't be protoss, like I cannot make a Marine a Prosin. same with Trapt, I cannot make a Zealot be a Trapt Race But only zexton can be all race's, because of the virus that was put in them made them change at a later age in life. Well the main objective is just finding fuel. but there's going to be so much more then just finding fuel! : D and yha im still working on that Diablo I rpg, I got no where due to the fact of school. and is Chef still a clan? if so am I still in it? : ( Also I think adding the refill for oxygen before you go outside the shelter is a great idea, is it orginal?

Yha, I was going through some trouble with school ^_^ haha damn school!

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what is the point of the races contradicting with the starcraft races?

I was basicly just saying that protoss = Prosin like Trapt can't be protoss, like I cannot make a Marine a Prosin.
same with Trapt, I cannot make a Zealot be a Trapt Race

But only zexton can be all race's, because of the virus that was put in them made them change at a later age in life.

Well the main objective is just finding fuel. but there's going to be so much more then just finding fuel! : D

and yha im still working on that Diablo I rpg, I got no where due to the fact of school. and is Chef still a clan? if so am I still in it? : (

Also I think adding the refill for oxygen before you go outside the shelter is a great idea, is it orginal?

Well, it has already been done, but not many maps have that since it bugs the players. The public dont really like complicated things, unless you make it easy to access.

Well, it has already been done, but not many maps have that since it bugs the players. The public dont really like complicated things, unless you make it easy to access.

Oxygen system was in Psychic_Genius " Mars II " map and can't remember what other maps. But still a nice idea somewhat. Mailing system just sounds like a radio/transmission system. Could make special bounty that you can hunt and get a reward off someone or something. I guess good luck with your map.

Oxygen system was in Psychic_Genius " Mars II " map and can't remember what other maps. But still a nice idea somewhat.

Mailing system just sounds like a radio/transmission system.

Could make special bounty that you can hunt and get a reward off someone or something.

I guess good luck with your map.

wow well your map making skills sound pretty credible :D So are the fuel cells just scattered all around why? and the bounties are like side quests I'm supposing.

wow well your map making skills sound pretty credible

So are the fuel cells just scattered all around why? and the bounties are like side quests I'm supposing.

[quote=Moogle]Oxygen system was in Psychic_Genius " Mars II " map and can't remember what other maps. But still a nice idea somewhat. Mailing system just sounds like a radio/transmission system. Could make special bounty that you can hunt and get a reward off someone or something. I guess good luck with your map.[/quote] Yha I think adding the oxygen thing is approperiate sence in the story line says that the world is not for living and they need to leave as soon as possible. Yha Imma change my words around on the mailing what I ment was that some mission's are going to require you to send monster's back to town, and it's easier using the mailing system, so you do not got to walk them back, or you can walk them back haha! Lol i'll reword that now after i go to the bathroom and sence im in the ealier stages of making this game, it's up for major change's so anything can change and I thank you for your time for posting on my thread.

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Oxygen system was in Psychic_Genius " Mars II " map and can't remember what other maps. But still a nice idea somewhat.

Mailing system just sounds like a radio/transmission system.

Could make special bounty that you can hunt and get a reward off someone or something.

I guess good luck with your map.

Yha I think adding the oxygen thing is approperiate sence in the story line says that the world is not for living and they need to leave as soon as possible.

Yha Imma change my words around on the mailing what I ment was that some mission's are going to require you to send monster's back to town, and it's easier using the mailing system, so you do not got to walk them back, or you can walk them back haha! Lol i'll reword that now after i go to the bathroom

and sence im in the ealier stages of making this game, it's up for major change's so anything can change and I thank you for your time for posting on my thread.

Some Things have changed read above~

Some Things have changed read above~

Do you have any progress on the map yet? If so I would love to see the estimates and see how it is all going :)

Do you have any progress on the map yet? If so I would love to see the estimates and see how it is all going

haha! funny you mentioned that, I've been working on the town shop's : ) Im havin fun with it so far! let's hope im not bored! and im going to put up some of the progress right after my brother get's off xbox 360 live LOl Updated some new stuff!

haha! funny you mentioned that, I've been working on the town shop's : ) Im havin fun with it so far! let's hope im not bored! and im going to put up some of the progress right after my brother get's off xbox 360 live LOl

Updated some new stuff!

haha cool cool. Got any pics you could show us?

haha cool cool. Got any pics you could show us?

Im not that far into the map to give out screen shot's because terrain is getting changed like every second, like for me I cannot finalize the terrain because I want it to be perfect. so until then nope. hopefully It will be going into alpha soon where I can test with other people to find some bug's.

Im not that far into the map to give out screen shot's because terrain is getting changed like every second, like for me I cannot finalize the terrain because I want it to be perfect. so until then nope. hopefully It will be going into alpha soon where I can test with other people to find some bug's.