I wrote a little ditty that goes something like this, and i call it little because it's four lines long. Not meant to be long so, Don't say "It's too short"
I wanted to write a song or a rhyme, a somewhat long one that would pass the time, but then i realized time has it's limits, and if i waste too much baby, we wont be in it.
ALL PRAISE YOUR SUPREME LORD CORBO
1. I have better spelling than you.
2. It doesn't even rhyme.
fuck you all
Mildly catchy, but I don't see why your trying to pass the time then waste it.
USE THE TIME!
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It's too short.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
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It's too short.
No, there's a point where "it's meant to be short" isn't an excuse.
4 lines is barely any work. Especially when the poem doesn't rhyme or follow some other ruleset for a poem.
Also, spellcheck.
4 lines is plenty for a poem. It's actually five?
I wanted to write a song or a rhyme,
a somewhat long one that would pass the time,
but then I realized time has it's limits,
and if I waste too much baby,
we won't be in it.
Shorten the bolded part, it sounds wordy. Make it like 'a pretty one, that would pass the time' or something simpler?
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- wtf, triple post... -
I can't report my own posts...
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