With
Wing Zero's sig, I would have treated the grey background line as if it were a horizon line. You never want a horizon line in the center of your image. Either putting the grey line higher or lower might have given the image a much more balanced look -especially if you had raised the line, then placed the shadow version of Wing Zero right on the bottom right thirds intersection, and darkened the shadows.
I can't tell if it was intentional or not with the
Poison_us image , but you had the explosion in the background and the face of Arcturus both leaning towards the center of the image. That is good. You also have them both leading the eye upward, and you gave a bright shine behind that uppermost cloud, and then had it shine in front of Arcturus a little, making him almost eclipse the light, making the entire image seem high in the air. Although, you left an awkward empty space on the left, which might have been solved by slightly shifting Arcturus to the left. It would be ideal to shift the bright spot behind Arcturus along with him all to the left.
The
CAFG image looks great.
The
B ETEFT image probably should have had that cross intersecting at the top left of the B ETEFT text, and the DT probably should have been shifted to the right slightly. See how the artist of the DT made the weapon green, and had some slight purple accents on the clothing? This is because the purple is complimentary to the green, and gives the image a very balanced feel without letting the green weapon overwhelm the eye. You may have been able to use a similar purple color somewhere.
The
Lotus image is really good, but I would think that the word Lotus should be centered on the intersection of the bottom left thirds focal point, rather than touching the edge of the thirds focal point. This would eat up some of the empty space on the left, and put the word Lotus right on the hot spot (concerning the rule of thirds).
I see you placing a lot of crosses in your signatures with the intersection right on a rule of thirds focal point. This is good, but if the eye is drawn to words within your signature, like in
this image, then you want to try to have the words sit in the rule of thirds intersection, not necessarily the cross. This is because in the Lotus image the word Lotus was more of a focus point for the eye than the actual intersection that you drew.
I see definite improvement of your signatures! You should line up your signatures in /encasebox tags in the order your completed them in, so that you can see your improvement better
Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Jul 2 2010, 12:55 am by CecilSunkure.
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