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[Poem] Murder of Seagulls
Aug 12 2011, 11:58 am
By: Azrael  

Aug 12 2011, 11:58 am Azrael Post #1



Seagulls outside my window,
sounding so delightful,
but the noise is getting louder,
their cries becoming frightful.
I rush to see what happened,
and find them staring back at me,
with a shotgun pointed at my head,
it seems I've been deceived.
I do not think, just turn to run,
but it is far too late.
One pulls the trigger with its beak,
I lose ten pounds of weight.
Shocked and confused, I reach up fast,
and touch warm sticky goo.
I'd feel fear if I could feel,
but instead I bid adieu.

Post has been edited 3 time(s), last time on Jan 18 2015, 3:59 am by Azrael. Reason: Removed dead shoutbox link. It was about all the deep symbolism.




Aug 12 2011, 1:08 pm LoTu)S Post #2



うみねこのなく頃に



None.

Aug 12 2011, 3:17 pm Phobos Post #3

Are you sure about that?

God damn it Lotus, you got ahead of me.



this is signature

Aug 12 2011, 7:49 pm Sand Wraith Post #4

she/her

Cool poem. I didn't get any of the symbolism stuff, but I had some nice images playing through my mind.

Also, I don't get it; what did Lotus post?




Aug 12 2011, 8:33 pm Aristocrat Post #5



Quote from LoTu)S
うみねこのなく頃に

You bitch, beat me to it :massimo:

@SW: Does the romanization ot it as "Umineko no naku koro ni" help?



None.

Aug 12 2011, 10:50 pm Sand Wraith Post #6

she/her

Quote from Aristocrat
@SW: Does the romanization ot it as "Umineko no naku koro ni" help?


nope




Aug 12 2011, 11:00 pm ClansAreForGays Post #7



laughed my ass off




Jun 14 2013, 8:49 am Azrael Post #8



We're approaching the two year anniversary of this critically acclaimed masterpiece, time to take another long look into the depths of its symbolism.




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