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Rantent's Stupid Poem
Aug 12 2008, 6:38 am
By: Rantent  

Aug 12 2008, 6:38 am Rantent Post #1



The solid blue came through the window, signaling the time.
The horror-struck walls stepped back, the floor endured the line.
I stood upon the balcony, to shout with all my might.
That I am a solid, and make shadows in the light.
The light replied by blinding me, and did so very well.
A flash of gaseous silent screams, a visage into hell.
It struck my mind, and stayed inside, my eyes could not withstand.
That I am a human, and cannot bear a sight so grand.


Yeah, you know I'm bored when I start making poetry. :bleh:



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Aug 12 2008, 6:39 pm The Great Yam Post #2



I have a better one:

There once was a duck, his name was Fred
I put him in the Toaster, and he cried
My Television doesn't like bean paste



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Aug 20 2008, 3:27 am Dapperdan Post #3



Lol. Points for making me laugh Yamhelm, so I'll let this slide. But you really shouldn't spam.

I like your poem Rantent.



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