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Aug 26 2009, 10:40 pm
By: ToA  

Aug 26 2009, 10:40 pm ToA Post #1

Que Sera, Sera.

http://www.purevolume.com/thehighercolor

http://www.myspace.com/thehighercolor

listen please, its 10x better than the first version.

Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Aug 26 2009, 10:56 pm by ToA.




Aug 27 2009, 2:03 am Syphon Post #2



I liked the music in the first half of the song, but the lyrics are kind of... Sloppy?

The rhyme scheme sounds forced, because there isn't really a metre. And the only thing that seemed to change in the chorus is the guitar.



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