1. People who are total crap with writing, and because I've blatantly told them so, no matter what I post, they'd post a negative response to be vengeful.
2. People who are never happy with anything posted here, and compare everything to someone who's been doing this forever.
3. And of course, the 'GO DIE EMO KID BECAUSE ANYTHING YOU POST IS EMO AND IS AUTO-HATED' the most belligerent of all.
I'm sure there will be some remark to that as well, but oh well.
But in spite of that, I thought 'Well, time to give SEN a chance.' and post my latest lyrics.
Your wounds were never the visible kind
But that doesn't mean that everything was all right
Your life had trials of it's own, even if they don't show
I can't pretend and say that I understand
But I'm trying to let you walk away and feel like the bigger man
I never meant to hurt you or bring you down
But this is a small town, and ones neighbor is the enemy
I know that on the inside, you're hurt and bleeding
But I'll try yeah, I'll try, to stop hurting, you now
You were never one of those loud types
Never the life of the party, always so soft spoken, so proud
Of all the things you did even if no one noticed you
But come on, don't tell me you don't get tired of the shadows
Don't tell me you're not through with playing the fool
I never meant to hurt you or bring you down
But this is a small town, and ones neighbor is the enemy
I know that on the inside, you're hurt and bleeding
But I'll try yeah, I'll try, to stop hurting, you now
Can I make amends for the damage I've done
Can you make up for something if you already won
And cast down all who had stood in your way
Even if they never deserved the fate you gave
Can I make amends for the damage I've caused
Stare at the wounds I've inflicted, wrapped in gauze
Feeling like a mad man who lives by no laws
I guess it's time to admit to such flaws
I never meant to hurt you or bring you down
(Bring you down)
But this is a small town, and ones neighbor is the enemy
(The enemy)
I know that on the inside, you're hurt and bleeding
(Bleeding)
But I'll try yeah, I'll try, I'm gonna try, do my best
To stop hurting you now
I'll do my best to take criticism here, I just hope it's constructive. Constructive criticism on SEN? Oh boy, maybe I was drinking.
Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Oct 24 2008, 7:03 am by Excalibur.
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