Map Details

Main Character

NPC's of RISIN

In-Game Races

Main Objective

Game Systems

Progress

Updates Of Map and Current Information

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Post has been edited 46 time(s), last time on Oct 4 2007, 7:10 am by SteamBoy.

I hope the production map has better spelling and grammar.

Interesting. A 2000-year backstory to explain that you're just doing a search mission?

Wow could you summarize that man. Thats too long.

Yeah I really can't read all that... It's a game, not a novel But If you bolded some key points and added topic headers I might consider it And as for the little bit I read, you know there's a spell check right?

Yha spell check for sure, but I did say *NOTE* there will be error's LOl =]
and yha! I could have went several way's but each time I kept writing idea's pop'd in my head.

but if it wasnt going to be research the story probably would have kept going, and the story line is more of the rpg style, sence the game is rpg, Role-Playing, and of course some game mission's are going to be refere'd to the story,

I'll get more in-detail as I progress into Closed-Beta alpha when I need some tester's.

ok cool cool! So this story is all original? wow its a good story board I'm excited to watch this map develop and take form! Good luck with everything

I updated more stuff so you guys will have more of an idea of what im trying to make

and of course more will be added and CHANGED! hehe =]

Haha ok alright that is what I wanted to see! And I actually read all of it lol!!!!! k well it sounds good so far, but how are your map making skills? have you made any maps already and if so can i check it out to see how good you are? and is it going to have custom terrain? Are there going to be cut scenes? Am I asking too many questions?

Ok so those are just some of the concerns I have As for your updated storyboard, here's a list of things you really should fix():
-all of the words like "agree'd" , "work'd" , and "suck'd" really need to just have an "e" instead of the [']mark. Haha so like "agreed" "worked" "sucked"

-This needs to be reworded, "If you do not accept the bounty and kill the person you can't" I get what your saying but it sounds like knives are stabbing at my ears... Maybe say, "You cannot kill a bounty until you have accepted the job, because..." see?

-"Oxygen doesn't need to be capitalized

-"to refill up" redundant, remove "up"

-"witch" should be "which"

-"researcher's" doesn't need the [']

-"almost got extinct" needs to be became

-and plenty of commas and periods could be added/removed but i'll let you slide haha

And no, I neither teach English, nor do I want to but I had to correct you because it was killing me

My map making skills, Im vary knowledgable about map making I have been in plenty of map making clans. though I only trully really made around 3 maps witch were vary easy because 2 of them were bound's and 1 was a defence that got stolen from me.

blue bound, just recenlty I logg'd on starcraft and seen someone play it, that got me realll excited!!! because I made that map when I was in Clan Oo.
I made another bound conquer bound when I first realsed it, I seen alot of people making it then I guess it just died down just like all other bounds.

and Nazi Defence. Yes Im the orginal maker want to fight it?, I know because I was stupid for public testing, and after I had no access to a computer when I came back I seen that someone had Nazi Defence, and they had the backwards Schwatizica how I had it and same Desert Layout. so yha, Nazi Defence is all me it just got jacked : (

and also the clans I been in
Mp)@West - Map Producers [ Mp)LuPiN ]
KoE)@West - Knights Of Eden [ KoE)LuPiN ]
(U)@West - Unknown [ LuPiN(U) ]
Oo. - Obstacle Onslaught? I forgot Lol - [ Oo.LuPiN.oO ]
Clan Chef - [ GTi ]

Although it's not impressive in getting into 'almost' every mapmaking clan because anyone can do it but that's just to show, how long I been around this map making buieness : )

And No im not doing extended terrain to much time, yha it would make the game look pretty, but im for fun, I dont want to spend a year on terrain because im slow at extended terrain. and I can't rely on anyone doing it. so Let's just hope it's going to be fun! =]


p.s: I should spell right, but you can thank starcraft chat for making me type the way I do. No one type's correct on StarCraft : ( I just got the speed! haha

Post has been edited 1 time(s), last time on Sep 10 2007, 3:15 am by SteamBoy.

Lol, so you're GTi? I remember recruiting you in CheF and disappearing like a few days after. This map seems like an interesting RPG but what is the point of the races contradicting with the starcraft races? This map reminds me of Page RPG, in which they have to find missing parts.

Yha, I was going through some trouble with school ^_^ haha damn school!


I was basicly just saying that protoss = Prosin like Trapt can't be protoss, like I cannot make a Marine a Prosin.
same with Trapt, I cannot make a Zealot be a Trapt Race

But only zexton can be all race's, because of the virus that was put in them made them change at a later age in life.

Well the main objective is just finding fuel. but there's going to be so much more then just finding fuel! : D

and yha im still working on that Diablo I rpg, I got no where due to the fact of school. and is Chef still a clan? if so am I still in it? : (

Also I think adding the refill for oxygen before you go outside the shelter is a great idea, is it orginal?

Well, it has already been done, but not many maps have that since it bugs the players. The public dont really like complicated things, unless you make it easy to access.

Oxygen system was in Psychic_Genius " Mars II " map and can't remember what other maps. But still a nice idea somewhat.

Mailing system just sounds like a radio/transmission system.

Could make special bounty that you can hunt and get a reward off someone or something.

I guess good luck with your map.

wow well your map making skills sound pretty credible

So are the fuel cells just scattered all around why? and the bounties are like side quests I'm supposing.

Yha I think adding the oxygen thing is approperiate sence in the story line says that the world is not for living and they need to leave as soon as possible.

Yha Imma change my words around on the mailing what I ment was that some mission's are going to require you to send monster's back to town, and it's easier using the mailing system, so you do not got to walk them back, or you can walk them back haha! Lol i'll reword that now after i go to the bathroom

and sence im in the ealier stages of making this game, it's up for major change's so anything can change and I thank you for your time for posting on my thread.

Some Things have changed read above~

Do you have any progress on the map yet? If so I would love to see the estimates and see how it is all going

haha! funny you mentioned that, I've been working on the town shop's : ) Im havin fun with it so far! let's hope im not bored! and im going to put up some of the progress right after my brother get's off xbox 360 live LOl

Updated some new stuff!

Post has been edited 2 time(s), last time on Sep 13 2007, 6:05 am by SteamBoy.

haha cool cool. Got any pics you could show us?

Im not that far into the map to give out screen shot's because terrain is getting changed like every second, like for me I cannot finalize the terrain because I want it to be perfect. so until then nope. hopefully It will be going into alpha soon where I can test with other people to find some bug's.