| Shocko | Dec 16 2007, 6:47 am | Post #1 |
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I'm writing blanks
Where words should be It's him i'll thank My ecstacy He left me hope A gift to me To build a boat To cross the seas With months of work I'll carve this tree And leave this dirt In hopes to see My love again From you to me My love again From me to you |
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| cosmicagent | Jan 14 2008, 1:10 am | Post #3 |
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It's pretty good.
What's the "writing blanks" think & how's it related to "building a boat" and the trees? |
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| Kainami | Mar 13 2008, 12:52 pm | Post #5 |
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I agree with cosmic. Too random. No offense. It wasn't bad though.
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| Shocko | May 25 2008, 7:21 am | Post #6 |
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Wow never noticed somebody replied to this, after bumping it ages ago...
The drawing blanks was the fact I was at my girlfriends house trying to make her poems and i ended up just making a song about ovaries... Then the boat thing was relevant to the fact that this person is saying that the other one is their ecstacy, and they left them the gift of hope, and if they try at it, and build this boat, they can cross the sea's to find this person, which meant more to me then others since im from England and not Canada... |
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