Poem
Dec 16 2007, 6:47 am
By: InsolubleFluff  

Dec 16 2007, 6:47 am InsolubleFluff Post #1



I'm writing blanks
Where words should be
It's him i'll thank
My ecstacy

He left me hope
A gift to me
To build a boat
To cross the seas

With months of work
I'll carve this tree
And leave this dirt
In hopes to see

My love again
From you to me
My love again
From me to you



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Dec 18 2007, 3:23 am InsolubleFluff Post #2



Bump ;D



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Jan 14 2008, 1:10 am SiberianTiger Post #3



It's pretty good.

What's the "writing blanks" think & how's it related to "building a boat" and the trees?



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Jan 16 2008, 2:42 am MadZombie Post #4



Very nice :|



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Mar 13 2008, 12:52 pm Kainami Post #5



I agree with cosmic. Too random. No offense. It wasn't bad though.



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May 25 2008, 7:21 am InsolubleFluff Post #6



Wow never noticed somebody replied to this, after bumping it ages ago...
The drawing blanks was the fact I was at my girlfriends house trying to make her poems and i ended up just making a song about ovaries...
Then the boat thing was relevant to the fact that this person is saying that the other one is their ecstacy, and they left them the gift of hope, and if they try at it, and build this boat, they can cross the sea's to find this person, which meant more to me then others since im from England and not Canada...



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