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Effulgent city
Radiance of gods
Immortals' metropolis
Holy and blessed
But incoming catastrophe
Discontent soul
In the mortal realm
To transcend his frame
In his sleep
In his dreamt realm
In his own territory
He shall construct an unimaginable weapon
The disgruntled soul
Trapped in a suffering frame
Forsaken by the gods
Vengeance incarnate
Cancerous body
Cancerous soul
Tumour of hatred
To be manifested
Heavenly city
Eternal residents
Peaceful, prosperous...
Pretentious pests!
How dare they look down
Upon this patient's patience!
Hellish hospital
Helpless healers
No one capable of curing him
No god to take pity upon him
Neglected and distraught
This soul enraged
Unimaginable weapon
Forged from mortal's fury
Wrathful relic
Wretched soul
Stairway to heaven
Opens up before him
Before man is paradise
Before him shall become hell
Deteriorating lights
Sewage overflowing
Rats invade
Immortal confusion
He comes
He comes
The mortal comes
He shall destroy all in his sleep
Gods in chaos
Falling city
Seas are heaving
The sky collapsing
Earth is ignited
Great conflagration
Immolated immortals
Incinerated innocents
Gods of chaos
Antagonized city
Falling fire
Ravaging revolution
The slaughter begins
A massacre of eternity
None shall survive
Lords of creation die
His weapon of will
Prolongs the carnage
The gods are butchered
Decapitation inevitable
Defenestrate them all
Send them flying through clouds
Their haven annihilated
Homeless and lifeless
Twitching limbs
Ashen ruins
Are all that remains
To accompany him
This is the end
Of fate-weaving demons
Witches and soothsayers
Given their graves
The soul is soothed
By the songs of vultures
As they feed upon corpses
And defecate over remains
His mission complete
Soul unites with body
Once more
But this is also his end
Though the soul is vindicated
The body still lies sick in bed
Soon it will be the end
For the weak mortal frame
The deed has been done
The gods have been slain
And now it is his turn
To be laid to rest
The mortal now dies
Given his grave
Left unvisited
For no family nor friends
Forever forgotten:
Godslayer.