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Long Verse I made
Jul 30 2010, 8:20 am
By: ETEFT(U)  

Jul 30 2010, 8:20 am ETEFT(U) Post #1



Herb, I wont tell. OooWee, I wont tell. But if you snitch on me then I'ma drop you in hell. Call me Rella, Call me Reala, doesn't matta. My pocket will always stay fata, gukki on his subway diet and still be as tasty as a hot enchilada. Put the 40-kal to a nigga's dome, we can say that nigga really got bummed home. Don't fuck with ratatoulie even tho he make good foode, but if a fooly try me he gon get the tooly, call me erik gardener, or your gardener, cut your grass and serve you for my 50, never taking sense but will take a quicky, you got a fat ass? you gon have to be twenty. Subtrakt to the number, 17 + 1 and I will hit her trunk with my bumper. Stereo so loud it go bunkaz, or bananaz, got so many guerillas im bathing in bandanaz... feed em their bananaz and they go monkey ape shit bananza! Japan cant handle'me, they got over Godzilla and they fear me, got bigger green monstaz lookin like an alien in a fukin skandal. I got ships parked all over stars just to pull the handle, i lite up the universe like a fukin candle. Straight outta Barcelona, Spain, but you can say I'm from mars, cuz a nigga is almost as famous as a fucking star. Shine as bright as the nikka jim jones car. Uncle jimmy gon miss me, but i got em' he gon say he a rider, but i shot em. He wasnt even blood related so i got em. GTA 4 is a great game so i popped'em. running from the cops, awesome. you doing time? floss em. My "unofficial" girl looking great, she just gloss em. Looked in her eyes for the first time tonight and I lost em.. once they returned into my sight, then i toss'ed em, but when I return she knows me and her gon ride like some boss'ems. CEO's and EXEKUTIVE hoes, thats funny, cuz all I can recall is CEO and "baby im so broke i need to live. give me some money." Call her CC but aint no bunny, she got yellow street looking like a crack head with a fat tummy. She loves to eat call her YUMMY, but now dates a fruit call him Gumby, or call him LEE, ill put the bruce to his first bitch and out comes jack and chan, thinking he cool in his motorcycle but he got a pussy for a dick, he aint no man. Have a good life and tell your mother she shoulda died when she had the chance to, she dead to me when she called the cops to dispurse me and you. Next time you see me ima shit on you, no litterally nigga Ill shit on your bike and you would think its bird poo? No nigga cuz my shit isnt white its brown like when you fuked my girl cindi who got a "pussy flu." Enjoy your aids nigga, i hope it was worth it, she didnt get it from me, probably the 7 other niggas she fuked after i loosened it up and did all the werk free. Now I got a new girl, call her "Monroe" so bad she will leave you in MIAMI searching for her extra fast super thorough. As bad as Marilyn Monroe, you can call her Marilyn M. but aint no dinero. But its okay I got enough to food to feed Africa, so bless haiti, jamica and wa' gwon and sak pase? but I had enough for today, I'ma live for the future and only think about my family, and if you a friend you better realize how deep and serious when i speak these words I am heavy. Mind so big sometimes its like a movie, call me austin powers because I am always feeling groovy. Got a lucy? Because I love mine, call her my blessing in disguise, cuz if a nigga touch her he gon see my nine. Triple 6 to his family and bring the mafia to his funeral. Laugh at the RIP's in his facebook simplying saying "Lul." Im a cold hearted animal, I dont have a heart, maybe an ICE BOX. My trap game so good, I should be a start in FOX. Welcome back weezy, he coming in november, if you were born in december, january, february or september, this yo year and remember that I told you! Horoscope on a song like some mother fukin voodoo. Alien life style we smoke mad hooka, we dont even need the loo-loo. Shit from Hawaii make a nigga wanna do the dance, but I dont boogey, I just do my 1-2 stance. 300 in this MUGG, what you know about that? I got niggas with shields and pikes killing your all infantry. Back off Steppy, before I bring the Knee. Choke you in your throat and never stop. nigga call me wellspree. Reverse time or words, It wont matter what I say. I am not a devil no illuminatay. Free Mason is amazing but I wont be it, open your eyes they say you can free it. Free what exaktly? I don't wanna see that. If I praise to god he will cease you back. Jesus on my side like a fucking holsta. Toast you up so good, I wont even need to roast ya with the toasta. Gnight to all my lovas, and to the haters i love you back. Kuz if you aint got no hatas you aint doing shit in yo life. - Wow I cant believe I wrote this on: 4/6/11.



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Jul 30 2010, 2:45 pm Magicide Post #2

Sleeping wolves wake hungry.

Can you organize this into paragraphs? Right now it's a little tl;dr and difficult to read.




Jul 30 2010, 3:03 pm MadZombie Post #3



Some people here are going to bash you because they hate rap. Others are going to bash you because they hate raps about this sort of thing when they haven't actually experienced this sort of thing. I'm the latter.

Sorry not a huge fan.

Should probably take it out of the paragraph form too.



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Jul 30 2010, 3:32 pm Symmetry Post #4

Dungeon Master

Could you post the beat?



:voy: :jaff: :voy: :jaff:

Jul 30 2010, 6:07 pm ETEFT(U) Post #5



Guess I could post a sample of the beat, it isn't done yet though.



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